隨著社會的快速發(fā)展和全球化的不斷深入，成人高考（簡稱“成考”）已經(jīng)成為許多在職人員提升學歷、拓寬職業(yè)發(fā)展道路的重要途徑之一。其中，英語科目作為考察語言能力的關(guān)鍵部分，對于考生來說既是挑戰(zhàn)也是機遇。本文將通過分析一篇2023年成人高等學校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（以下簡稱“成考”）英語寫作題目及其優(yōu)秀范文，幫助大家更好地理解如何準備此類考試，并提高自己的英語寫作水平。

題目回顧

假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友Tom正在計劃來中國旅游。請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

  1. 表示歡迎；
  2. 推薦幾個值得一去的地方；
  3. 提醒需要注意的事項。

參考范文

Dear Tom,

I hope this email finds you well. It’s great to hear that you’re planning a trip to China! I would be delighted to welcome you here and can’t wait for your visit.

China is such an amazing country with rich history and culture. There are several places I highly recommend visiting:

  • Beijing: As the capital city, Beijing offers many attractions like the Great Wall, Forbidden City, Temple of Heaven, etc. You won’t want to miss these iconic sites.
  • Shanghai: Known as the “Pearl of the Orient,” Shanghai combines modernity with tradition beautifully. The Bund area along the Huangpu River provides stunning views especially at night when all buildings light up.
  • Chengdu: If you enjoy nature and cute animals, then Chengdu should definitely be on your list. It’s home to adorable giant pandas which are absolutely worth seeing in person!

Before you come, there are some things worth noting:

  1. Make sure to apply for a Chinese visa beforehand.
  2. Check local weather forecasts so you can pack appropriately.
  3. Be aware that some rural areas might not have good internet connection, but cities generally do.
  4. Learn a few basic phrases in Mandarin; even simple greetings like “你好” (nǐ hǎo - hello) or “謝謝” (xiè xiè - thank you) will make interactions easier and more enjoyable.

Looking forward to seeing you soon! If there’s anything specific you’d like to know about preparing for your trip or any other questions you may have, feel free to ask me anytime.

Best regards, Li Hua

解析與建議

從上述范文中可以看出，一篇好的英語作文通常包含以下幾個要素：

  • 清晰的結(jié)構(gòu)：文章開頭直接表達了寫信的目的——對朋友的到來表示熱烈歡迎。接下來按照題目要求依次介紹了北京、上海和成都三個城市的特色景點，最后給出了幾點旅行前的建議。
  • 豐富內(nèi)容：除了必須提到的地方外，作者還額外提供了關(guān)于簽證申請、天氣查詢等方面的提示信息，體現(xiàn)了周到細致的態(tài)度。
  • 適當使用連接詞：合理運用如”firstly”, “secondly”, “furthermore”等過渡詞匯可以讓文章更加流暢易讀。
  • 個性化表達：在結(jié)尾處鼓勵對方隨時聯(lián)系自己獲取更多幫助，展現(xiàn)了友好熱情的一面。

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