在2014年的英語高考中，作文題目引起了廣大考生的廣泛關(guān)注。那一年度的作文題目是“假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jim來信詢問你的寒假生活，請你寫一封回信向他描述?！边@一題目不僅考察了學(xué)生對書信格式的掌握，還要求他們能夠用流利的英語表達個人生活和情感。

以下是一篇高分范文：

Dear Jim,

I hope this letter finds you well. Thank you for your last letter and I am glad to hear that you had a great Christmas with your family. Now, let me tell you about my winter vacation.

The holiday began with the Chinese New Year, also known as the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China. My parents and I decorated our house with red lanterns and couplets, creating a festive atmosphere. We also set off fireworks on New Year’s Eve to celebrate the arrival of the new year. It was a spectacular sight and a lot of fun!

During the holiday, I visited some relatives and friends with my parents. We exchanged gifts and had several family gatherings, where we enjoyed delicious food and shared stories from the past year. It was a time for family bonding.

Besides the festivities, I also made sure to allocate some time for studying. I reviewed my lessons and completed some assignments that were given before the holiday. This way, I stayed caught up with my schoolwork while still enjoying the break.

In addition, I took advantage of the free time to read a few books that I had been wanting to read but hadn’t had the chance. Reading not only enriched my knowledge but also provided me with a lot of pleasure.

Overall, my winter vacation was both enjoyable and productive. How about your holidays? I hope they were equally wonderful. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes, Li Hua

這篇文章從結(jié)構(gòu)上清晰地分為開頭、正文和結(jié)尾三個部分。開頭部分直接切入主題，回應(yīng)了信件的內(nèi)容；正文部分詳細(xì)描述了寒假生活，包括春節(jié)慶祝活動、家庭團聚以及學(xué)習(xí)情況；結(jié)尾部分則表達了對朋友假期生活的期待，并禮貌地結(jié)束了信件。整篇文章語言流暢、內(nèi)容豐富，充分展示了作者的英語寫作能力。